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Post by xxkingxx on Sept 14, 2007 13:51:18 GMT -5
well I'm still trying out Grunge and with my last one I made it way too big and I left a lot of negative space so with this one I hope there isn't much open space so here it is
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Post by Con Artist on Sept 15, 2007 0:52:19 GMT -5
not bad,
the backround looks very good, but the harsh textures in the render kinda throw off the smoother textures in the BG.
in my opinion the shine looks a bit strange and out of place since this is a mainly dark themed signature. When i use a lense flare it usualy works better with a medium or bright toned color scheme.
you did the text pretty well; except you need a little more to it. usualy what i do is mess with the blending a tad so you have more than just a couple translucent lines.
overall not bad keep on working your still inproving alot. GJ.
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